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ลำดับตอนที่ #3 : Ib - Narrative Writing (10/11/59)

Ib (Tragedy Story)

          In this world, there still has a person who can sacrifice this much for a stranger. All the story were started 4 years ago on her 9 birthday. Her parents brought her to the famous art gallery. She was very happy, wandering off on her own, although there are many words she couldn’t understand. She asked other visitors when she didn’t understand the explanation under each pictures or art works.

She enjoyed watching wonderful art works until she found a very big picture which she couldn’t read its name. She wandered for half an hour and came back to find her parents but there were no one here, other visitors also gone. She was alone in this gallery.

After tried to find the way out many times, she rested and found some words were written on the floor, told her to go down. When she went down to the first floor, she found the blue footprint, it was like there was someone here so she followed the trace and go down in the fish picture named ‘Deep Sea’.

Suddenly, when she went around and wanted to go back, the exit was gone. She lost in the Picture’s World, the world that every art works alive. She have to find the way out by solving many puzzles along the way to gain the key and open the blue, green, yellow and a red doors. She also obtained the red roses which represent her life. If she lost all the red roses, she will die.

After she solved some puzzles and opened the blue door, she found a man lying on the floor. He has a small key in his hand. She used that small key to open the locked door and find blue roses for him, it represent his life just like her red rose. When he got blue roses back, he recovered and gain consciousness. She told him that she stuck in this world and wanted to find the way out.

“My name is Garry, and you?” he asked. “Ib,” the little girl answered.

Garry thought that it was dangerous for a child to be all on their own so he decided to stick with her. They solved many puzzles and opened the green door together. Because Ib was only 9 years old, she didn’t understand the trick and wickedness of this mysterious world, Garry have to save her life so many times.

When they did something wrong in the puzzle, they will lose one petal of their roses. Which means they will feel pain every time they lose one petal of the rose. And if they got caught with the monsters, they will lose 1 roses. If they lose all the roses, they will die.

Garry always protected Ib, although he had to put his life in danger. Actually, he is just a coward man who even scare of his own shadow. But when he’s with Ib, he has a feeling that he have to protect her no matter what happened.

And when they finished solving another puzzle, the yellow door is opened so they went on another room and found one little girl. Her name is Marry, a yellow hair girl age about Ib. After that, Marry joined them and the 3 of them went through the hard time together. Marry liked Ib very much. She had no friend before so Ib is her first and only friend. Ib seems to be okay with Marry but Garry didn’t. Garry felt strange about Marry, but he thought it might be just his imagination.

When they were trying to solve puzzle to open the red door, the vine suddenly appeared, separate them into 2 group. Garry was alone on the left side and Marry was with Ib on the right side. Garry tried to find the way to reunion and then, was locked in one room. He had to solve another puzzle to go out of this room.

This room is full with many dolls and it has a blank picture hanging on the wall. While he searched the room to find some trace that related to the puzzle, he found the truth that Marry wasn’t a real human. She was a PICTURE that can be alive. Garry was very panic. Right now, Ib was with Marry. Just then, the dolls all over the room were move closer to him. He tried to open the door but it stuck. He turned back to see that there is not just a little dolls on the ground that can move, but also the giant doll were climbing out from the blank picture. He ran all the room, trying to fide the key and the last thing he can remember was a darkness.

Ib and Marry went all the way and found Garry. He was talking to himself. IB called out to him but Garry didn’t responded. She decided to slap his face. Garry, then, gain his consciousness. But because he faced with a terrible moment, he forgot about Marry was not a human.

The one puzzle and another was solved, Garry gain his memory back. He can remember now that Marry wasn’t a real human. She was like other paintings which came after Ib and Him. When he had chance, he take Ib with him an ran way.

Finally, When they were about to find the way out of this crazy world, Marry stole Ib’s roses and wanted Garry’s rose in exchange. Garry didn’t even hesitated to trade his blue rose. He exchanged his life with a little Ib’s life. And when Marry had Garry’s roses, she ran away. Ib felt sad that she caused him a big trouble, but Garry didn’t angry at all. He said that they just have to go after Marry and take the rose back, trying to soothe Ib.

They went after Marry but unexpectedly, Garry felt a very bad pain and fallen on the floor. Ib found many petals of blue rose are left on the floor. She also heard the sound of Marry said “Loves me…loves me not,”

Garry didn’t has enough strength to stand and walk so he was lying there, told Ib that if she needs help, just say it out loud he will come and help her.

Ib went all the way until she found the black door, the last one. Marry already be there before Ib and told her not to leave. Marry wants Ib to stay with her in this Picture’s World. While Marry come closer to Ib, Garry appeared and shout to Ib that she had to burn Marry’s picture. Ib burnt the picture with match and Marry disappear with a tear in her eyes. Garry falling on the floor again, but this time he felt that he can’t move anymore. All the petals of his rose were gone.

Garry told Ib to go back first. He said that when he feet better he will go after her. Ib obey him and entered the black door, came back to the original wold. Although Garry said that he will go after her but Ib never see him again.

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10/11/2559